Simpler Version:
Passage:
The sun set, casting a warm glow across the lake. The water sparkled, reflecting the colors of the sky. A gentle breeze rustled the trees, making the leaves dance. The air smelled of grass and flowers. Birds chirped, then crickets sang. The world was vibrant, like a painting.
Questions:
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Identify two examples of imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Explain how the imagery in the passage helps create a mental picture for the reader. (3 marks)
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Describe the atmosphere created by the imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Suggest one word that could be used to summarize the overall effect of the imagery in the passage. (1 mark)
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Evaluate the effectiveness of the imagery in engaging the reader’s senses and emotions. (2 marks)
Marking Scheme:
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Two correct examples of imagery identified (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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Clear explanation of how the imagery creates a mental picture (1.5 marks each) - 3 marks
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Accurate description of the atmosphere created by the imagery (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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One appropriate word suggested to summarize the overall effect of the imagery (1 mark) - 1 mark
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Evaluation of the effectiveness of the imagery in engaging the reader’s senses and emotions (1 mark each) - 2 marks
Total Marks: 10 marks
Same Version:
Passage:
The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm golden glow across the tranquil lake. The water shimmered like liquid gold, reflecting the vibrant hues of the sky. A gentle breeze rustled through the trees, causing the leaves to dance and twirl in the air. The scent of freshly cut grass mingled with the sweet fragrance of blooming flowers, creating a symphony of aromas. As the evening descended, the chirping of birds gradually transformed into a chorus of crickets, filling the air with their rhythmic melody. The world seemed to be painted in a palette of vivid colors, as if nature itself was an artist creating a masterpiece.
Questions:
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Identify two examples of imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Explain how the imagery in the passage helps create a vivid mental picture for the reader. (3 marks)
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Describe the atmosphere created by the imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Suggest one word that could be used to summarize the overall effect of the imagery in the passage. (1 mark)
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Evaluate the effectiveness of the imagery in the passage in terms of engaging the reader’s senses and emotions. (2 marks)
Marking Scheme:
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Two correct examples of imagery identified (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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Clear explanation of how the imagery creates a vivid mental picture (1.5 marks each) - 3 marks
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Accurate description of the atmosphere created by the imagery (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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One appropriate word suggested to summarize the overall effect of the imagery (1 mark) - 1 mark
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Evaluation of the effectiveness of the imagery in engaging the reader’s senses and emotions (1 mark each) - 2 marks
Total Marks: 10 marks
More Complex Version:
Passage:
The radiant sun gracefully descended below the vast horizon, casting a resplendent and warm golden glow across the serene and undisturbed lake. The water, like a mirror, shimmered and glistened, reflecting the kaleidoscope of vibrant hues that adorned the celestial canvas above. A gentle zephyr, laden with whispers of nature’s secrets, delicately caressed the majestic trees, causing the emerald leaves to pirouette and waltz in the ethereal air. The intoxicating scent of freshly cut grass mingled harmoniously with the sweet and heady fragrance of blooming flowers, creating an enchanting symphony of aromas that embraced the senses. As the sun bid its farewell, the melodious chirping of birds gradually transformed into a symphony of crickets, their rhythmic cadence filling the atmosphere with a nocturnal melody. The world, like a masterpiece painted by the hand of nature herself, seemed to be imbued with a vibrant palette of vivid colors, evoking a sense of awe and wonder.
Questions:
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Identify two examples of imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Explain how the imagery in the passage helps create a vivid mental picture for the reader. (3 marks)
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Describe the atmosphere created by the imagery in the passage. (2 marks)
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Suggest one word that could be used to summarize the overall effect of the imagery in the passage. (1 mark)
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Evaluate the effectiveness of the imagery in the passage in terms of engaging the reader’s senses and emotions. (2 marks)
Marking Scheme:
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Two correct examples of imagery identified (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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Clear explanation of how the imagery creates a vivid mental picture (1.5 marks each) - 3 marks
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Accurate description of the atmosphere created by the imagery (1 mark each) - 2 marks
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One appropriate word suggested to summarize the overall effect of the imagery (1 mark) - 1 mark
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Evaluation of the effectiveness of the imagery in engaging the reader’s senses and emotions (1 mark each) - 2 marks
Total Marks: 10 marks