Character fears battle on overcrowded boat.

You 07 Mar, 18:17:53

Create an advanced sentence that describes standing on a crowded boat waiting ready for war, feeling nervous and scared. include a fronted adverbial and show not tell about the characters emotions

Teacherbot 07 Mar, 18:17:53

Nervously and with a pounding heart, amidst the throngs of people on the overcrowded boat, the character's apprehension and fear were palpable as they awaited the impending battle, their hands shaking and their breaths shallow.